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A Happy Spring Festival


张雨晴   (深圳南山实验教育集团小学)
2025-10-16

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Spring Festival is the most important festival in China, and I always look forward to it. This year’s Spring Festival was especially happy, with my grandparents coming to my home to celebrate together.

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One week before Spring Festival, we started preparing. Mom and I went to the supermarket to buy snacks and new clothes. I chose a red jacket—it’s said red brings good luck. Dad and grandpa cleaned the house thoroughly; they wiped the windows and swept the floor. Every evening, we pasted red couplets on the door together. I held the couplets, and dad taped them—we laughed when I held them upside down by mistake. 小学生语文培训,苏州易优阅读写作同步提升</a>

On New Year’s Eve, the most exciting moment came. We made dumplings together. Grandma taught me how to fold the dumpling skin; at first, my dumplings looked messy, but after practicing, they became nice. At 8 p.m., we watched the Spring Festival Gala on TV while eating dumplings. When the clock struck 12, we set off small fireworks in the yard—they were colorful and beautiful.

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On New Year’s Day, I wore my new jacket and said “Happy New Year” to my grandparents. They gave me red envelopes with money inside, and I promised to use the money to buy books. We also visited my aunt’s family; we ate delicious food and played games with my little cousin.

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This Spring Festival was full of joy and warmth. I love Spring Festival, and I’m already looking forward to next year’s festival.

作文点评:
标题 “Happy” 点明节日氛围,贴合主题。内容按 “节前准备 — 除夕活动 — 新年当天 — 情感总结” 的时间顺序写,逻辑清晰,“One week before”“On New Year’s Eve” 等过渡词明确时间线。细节如 “贴倒春联”“学包 dumplings”“放烟花” 充满传统节日特色,真实还原春节场景。情感真挚,字里行间洋溢着节日的快乐。缺点是 “拜访亲戚” 部分可补充具体游戏,避免笼统。改进建议:在拜访 aunt 段落加 “我和 cousin 玩‘猜灯谜’游戏,我赢了他送的小兔子玩偶”,让场景更生动。(185 字)


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