托福 写作语言要平时，但是中国学生的作文最大特点是语言空洞，看似有道理，但禁不起推敲，这恰巧和托福 写作备考的要求相悖。透视托福写作的评分标准，一篇好的作文段落中需要包含主题句、合理的解释、以及例子的支撑。
究竟怎样写才能够达到考官的托福写作语言标准呢。好的写作者从不写他没有见到过、读到过或者听到过的英语，也就是说多看好的范文，进行剖析和模仿是最有效的途径之一。
Aeroplanes have the reputation of being dangerous and even hardened travelers are intimidated by them. They also have the disadvantage of being an expensive form of transport. But nothing can match them for speed and comfort. 段落的开头使用让步加转折的逻辑关系引出了段落的主题：飞机旅行的有点—速度快、舒适。
这也预示了段落内部的层次。 Travelling at a height of 30,000 feet, far above the clouds, and at over 500 miles an hour is an exhilarating experience. You do not have to devise ways of taking your mind off the journey, for an aeroplane gets you to your destination rapidly. 论述飞机速度的过程中：替代笼统表达高和快，作者直接写出了飞机飞行的具体高度
