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一篇好的SAT作文要满足以下几个要求,即好的内容、好的论点与论据、清晰且恰当的举例说明、段与段之间有好的逻辑关系、观点鲜明与清晰及较好的英语写作掌控力、有变化的句型与词汇。考生要尽力避免观点模糊不清、在议论文当中一会儿说对一会儿又说错、语言表达单一、不以理服人、自以为是给人强加自己的观点、字迹不清及文章太短等问题。
SAT学生习作:(基础一般,笔者把文章拆成了五部分,分别点评)
Some failed experiences are useful for us.
一.Take myself for as an example. I played tennis at the age of eight. When I was eleven years old, I took part in a Sports Meeting about tennis which was organized by Jiangsu Province, a province in the southeast of China. 1At the beginning of the group match I had won two opponents, but my third opponent, Hu, who was in the Jiangsu 2provinciance”s team, defeated me. The score was 1:6 and 2:6. At the end of our match, he held out his thumb to the ground and said, “Loser! You cannot win forever!”
I could not forget it after the match, though I would have another doubles match the next day. (营造失败的记忆)
分析:
1.in the first group stage
2.provincial team 省队
二.1 His words reverberated unceasingly