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There is not enough respect for the elderly people. What are the causes and what problems does this phenomenon create？There is a growing tendency nowadays for some people to regard the elderly people as a troublesome group. Gradually， this leads to not revere （这是啥意思？！ lead to 后面接 doing ！） the elderly people in diverse conditions. Yet in my opinion， instead of contempting every one should treat them as our treasure （这句话本身就有点变扭，感觉很怪！） 。 But， what causes the promble？ Here i give two ma
