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托福写作批改点评 第17期:TPO综合写作批改

Topic(题目):
Do young people enjoy life more than older people?
Target text(文章正文):
Never does the topic, referring to whetherpeople enjoy life more than older people, fails to arouse the attention ofpublics. With the tremendous development we have made, I maintain that peopleat this day and age enjoy life more than people generations ago.
First and foremost, decades ago, peace issuch a desirable word for people around the world that they can only dream ofit day and night. Take the Nanjing massacre and holocaust as a convincing casein point, which took place in the Second World War, millions of Jews andChinese people were murdered cruelly and mercilessly due to the atrocities madeby German and Japanese militaries and fascists.But look at the picture now, during the time when China suffered from Wenchuan earthquake catastrophe, hundreds of varied cou

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