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奥巴马总统Barack Obama
Dani V. Similar to the caste system in Ancient India, our modern world is still suffering the effects of a class system. Generally you are born into your family”s wealth and class, making it hard to escape from this vicious circle. However, Barack Obama, a modern day hero had his goals and priorities set from a young age. Living in a poor African American family he had a hard childhood, but had unwavering motivation to thrive. He wanted to live the American dream, break away from his family's path and succeed. He is not a hero because the color of his skin, but because he has paved a road for under privileged minorities across the world and has maintained his morals and integrity while still being a successful president. He acted as the perfect counter attack to the Bush administrations' faulty rule from 2000~2008. He has made a mark in history that will never be forgotten and will forever change the normalities of our culture and government.
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点评：
很有意思的类比"Similar to the caste system in Ancient India, our modern world...", "vicious circle"。写得不错
