一直以来,关于托福 作文备考大家都存在一个误区,认为托福 写作词汇越华丽越高大上,话虽如此,但光是华丽的托福独立写作词汇并不能为托福作文加分很多,同样的如果只是低级词汇,那么毫无疑问你的托福作文也不会拿到高分。下面,天道小编带大家来看一下什么样的托福写作词汇算是低级词汇。
1.Original: We know that sometimes success is measured by how much money you earn.
Revised: It does not surprise us to discover that sometimes success is measured in terms of the money you earn.
点评:know是非常初级的词汇,作文中出现I believe that…,I know that…这样的表达只能体现考生写作技巧的稚嫩,用It does not surprise us to discover that…替换We know that…并没有改变原句的含义,却使全句顿时增添了亮点。
2.Original: We all know that most factories would be of no use if there were not clean water supply.
Revised: It goes wit