由于新托福 议论文分从0分到5分不等;而雅思 议论文则从0分到9分不等,笔者选取两者的满分文章来进行对比。
关键字:评分标准解读和范文分析
雅思9分文章评分标准描述:
Task Responsefully addresses all parts of the task
presents a fully developed position in answer to the question with relevant, fully extended and well supported ideas
Coherence and Cohesionuses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention
skillfully manages paragraphing
Lexical Resourceuses a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated control of lexical features; rear minor errors occur on as “slips”
Grammatical Range and Accuracyuses a wide range of structures with full flexibility and accuracy; rare minor errors occur only as “slips”
雅思9分文章评分标准解读:
1.在第一项的任务完成度中,对于9分文章的要求有2个。第一,它必须完全解答作文问题中所提出的问题。第二,必须对所提出的观点进行充分合理的延伸和论证。在这一点上,雅思议论文的9分文章和8分文章相差无几。而在7分文章中,对于这一项的要求则改变为: presents, extends and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalize and/or supporting ideas may lack focus.”也就是说,考生在能表达和延伸支持论点的情况下,允许犯一些诸如“以偏盖全 ” 或者在支持论点的时候缺乏重点的情况。
2.在第二项的关于“连贯和一致”的评分标准中,对于考生的语言使用能力则已经开始趋向于真正的英语为母语国家的作者。这一点,从它对于连接方法 的要求上就可见一斑。“使用连接手段须不露痕迹” 而8分的文