学生习作：（基础一般，笔者把文章拆成了五部分，分别点评）
Some failed experiences are useful for us.
一.Take myself for as an example. I played tennis at the age of eight. When I was eleven years old, I took part in a Sports Meeting about tennis which was organized by Jiangsu Province, a province in the southeast of China. 1At the beginning of the group match I had won two opponents, but my third opponent, Hu, who was in the Jiangsu 2provinciance”s team, defeated me. The score was 1:6 and 2:6. At the end of our match, he held out his thumb to the ground and said, “Loser! You cannot win forever!”
I could not forget it after the match, though I would have another doubles match the next day. (营造失败的记忆)
分析：
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