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雅思大作文点评:学生是否应上私立中学?

Some people think students should go to private secondary schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
  More attention has been paid to education, playing a vital role in every field (首先,这个非谓语动词词组读上去感觉不是很顺,再仔细一想,它到底是修饰谁呢?从语法上来说,似乎没有问题,但从意思表达上来说,表达不清) , by the whole society, especially parents( 这里加个 by ,意思比较清晰点,而且结构上来说更好,即 by the parents). It is not surprising that a burning problem (这个 burning 用的很不错,大家学习一下,比如 a burning interest (强烈的兴趣爱好,即酷爱) in science ; I had a burning ambition (强烈的野心,即雄心勃勃) to become a journalist ; The burning question (严重的,紧急的问题) in this year's debate over the federal budget is: whose taxes should be raised? ) for parents is whether they should send their offspring t

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