2003年下半年我曾收到一位备考者的写作样品，希望给予点评。由于当时事务繁忙，无暇做详细的评判，现在正好可以弥补这一缺憾。通过点评此文，笔者希望中国学生能从它所暴露出来的某些通病中汲取教训。
10-1：原文如下
Topic:
People have been so encouraged by society to focus on apparent differences that they fail to see meaningful similarities among ideas, individuals, and groups.
Differences and personality seem to have been playing a crucial role in our society in many aspects, whether ideas, individuals, or groups, for the incentive to stand out in the increasingly larger amount of output by societ
