Last spring, my science teacher gave each of us a small tomato seed. She told us to plant it and take care of it, then write down its growth. I was excited to have my own little plant. 小学生语文培训，苏州易优阅读写作同步提升</a>

First, I prepared a small pot and some soil. My dad helped me put the soil into the pot, and I dug a small hole in the soil. I put the seed into the hole, covered it with soil, and watered it gently. I put the pot on the balcony, where it could get enough sunlight. Every day after school, I went to the balcony to check the pot—waiting for the seed to sprout.

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After a week, a small green shoot came out of the soil! It was only 2 centimeters tall, with two small leaves. I was so happy that I called my mom to see it. From then on, I watered the plant every two days (Dad said too much water would kill it) and put it in the sun every morning. 找中小学生语文题库，就搜微信“易优阅读宝”

After a month, the plant grew taller—about 15 centimeters. It had more leaves, and some small yellow flowers appeared. The flowers were very beautiful; I smelled them, and they had a light fragrance. A week later, the flowers fell off, and small green tomatoes grew! They were as small as my fingernail. 苏州易优吴老师中考语文提分班（TEL:181-1815-9898）有趣、有用、提分快

Last month, the tomatoes turned red. There were five small red tomatoes on the plant. I picked one, washed it, and ate it—it was sweet and juicy! I shared the other tomatoes with my family and teacher. Taking care of the tomato plant taught me patience, and eating the tomatoes gave me a great sense of achievement.

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标题明确 “照顾小番茄苗”，主题聚焦植物观察与养护。内容按 “播种 — 发芽 — 长叶开花 — 结果 — 收获” 的生长过程写，逻辑清晰，“First, After a week, After a month” 等过渡词明确时间线。细节如 “2 厘米芽”“指甲大番茄”“酸甜口感” 真实细致，体现观察用心；养护过程（浇水、晒太阳）符合植物生长规律。情感上，“excited”“happy”“sense of achievement” 表达成就感，感染力强。缺点是 “开花” 部分可加更多观察，如蜜蜂采蜜。改进建议：在开花段落加 “One day, I saw a small bee on the flowers—it was collecting nectar, which helps the tomatoes grow”，增加科学性。（182 字）