Winter holiday is coming soon, and I made a detailed plan to make my holiday meaningful and happy. I don’t want to waste time—instead, I want to learn new things and have fun.

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First, I will study every day. I will finish my winter holiday homework first—math exercises, English reading and Chinese compositions. Then I will read some extra books. My dad bought me a book about animals, and I plan to read 10 pages every day. I also want to practice my English speaking—every morning, I will listen to English songs and repeat them, and talk with my mom in simple English.

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Second, I will play and exercise. I love ice-skating, so I plan to go ice-skating with my friends twice a week. My dad said he would teach me to skate better—I hope I can learn to spin on the ice. I will also play badminton with my brother every afternoon; it’s good for my health and makes me strong. 易优语文培训，（TeL:181-1815-9898）苏州阅读写作同步提升

Third, I will help my family. My mom is busy every day, so I will help her do housework—wipe the table, wash the dishes and fold the clothes. On weekends, I will help my grandma make dumplings. She taught me last year, and this year I want to make better dumplings. 易优语文题库,同步教材，真题演练，提分就是快 https://cs.euzW.net

Finally, I plan to visit my aunt’s family in another city. We will stay there for three days. I will play with my cousin, go to the park with them and eat delicious food. I’m looking forward to my winter holiday—it will be busy but happy.

作文点评：
标题明确 “寒假计划”，主题积极。内容按 “学习 — 玩乐锻炼 — 帮家人 — 拜访亲戚” 的分类展开，结构清晰，“First, Second, Third, Finally” 等过渡词条理分明。计划具体可行，如 “每天读 10 页书”“每周滑冰两次”，体现合理性；兼顾学习、娱乐与家务，安排全面。情感上，“looking forward to”“happy” 表达对寒假的期待，传递积极心态。缺点是 “学习” 部分可加具体目标，如 “背 20 个英语单词”。改进建议：在学习段落加 “我还计划每天背 20 个新英语单词，写在卡片上，方便记忆”，让计划更细致。（180 字）