I joined the school art club last year, and it’s the best decision I’ve made. The art club meets every Thursday afternoon, and we do many interesting art activities with our teacher, Ms. Liu.

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Every club day, we start with a small warm-up activity. Once, we drew “our dream house” in 10 minutes—some drew houses with wings, some drew houses under the sea. My dream house had a big garden with many flowers. Ms. Liu looked at our drawings and gave us small comments, which helped me draw better.

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We also learn different art skills. Last month, we learned to make paper flowers. Ms. Liu showed us how to fold the paper, cut it and stick it together. At first, my paper flower looked messy, but with Ms. Liu’s help, I made a beautiful red paper flower. I gave it to my mom, and she put it in a small vase.

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Last week, the art club held a small exhibition in the school hall. We put our best works on the wall—my drawing of a cat, Lily’s paper flowers, Tom’s model plane (he made it in the club) and many others. Many students and teachers came to see the exhibition. A teacher said my cat drawing was “cute and lively”, and I felt very proud.

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Joining the art club makes me happy. I learn new art skills, make new friends and show my works to others. I will stay in the art club next year and learn more interesting things.

作文点评：
标题明确 “学校艺术社团”，主题聚焦校园社团生活。内容按 “社团日常 — 热身活动 — 学做纸花 — 举办展览 — 总结” 展开，结构清晰，“Every club day, also, Last week” 等过渡词自然。细节如 “10 分钟画梦想屋”“做红色纸花”“社团展览” 真实具体，体现社团活动的丰富性。情感上，“best decision”“happy”“proud” 表达对社团的喜爱，传递团队活动的快乐。缺点是 “社团朋友” 可加更多互动，如合作完成作品。改进建议：在展览段落加 “Lily and I worked together to decorate the exhibition wall with colorful ribbons”，体现团队合作。（181 字）