Last Wednesday afternoon, it rained heavily. The rain hit the windows with a “tick-tock” sound, and the sky was gray. I couldn’t go out to play, but I had a cozy and happy afternoon at home with my mom.

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First, I read a storybook on the sofa. The book was 《The Little Prince》—it’s a very interesting story about a little prince who travels to different planets. I sat under a warm blanket, and my cat curled up next to me. The rain outside and the warm room made me feel very comfortable. I read two chapters and then told my mom about the story—she listened carefully and asked me questions about the little prince. 苏州易优语文培训，中小学阅读写作同步提升 https://www.Euzw.net/miniform.html

Then, we made crafts together. Mom found some colored paper, scissors and glue. We decided to make paper boats. I folded the paper step by step, following mom’s instructions. My boat had a blue sail with a small star on it. Mom’s boat was pink, with flowers on the sail. We put the boats in a basin of water—they floated well, and we laughed as we blew on them to make them move. 易优语文培训，苏州阅读写作同步提升 https://www.Euzw.net/miniform.html

In the evening, we baked cookies. Mom measured the flour, sugar and butter, and I mixed them together. I also shaped the dough into small animals—cats, dogs and rabbits. We put the cookies in the oven, and soon the kitchen smelled sweet. When the cookies were ready, they were golden and crispy. We ate them with hot milk—they were delicious!

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Even though it rained and I couldn’t go out, this rainy afternoon was very happy. I love spending time with my mom at home on rainy days.

作文点评：
标题 “Rainy Afternoon at Home” 点明场景，营造温馨氛围。内容按 “读书 — 做手工 — 烤饼干 — 总结” 的活动顺序写，逻辑连贯，“First, Then, In the evening” 等过渡词明确时间线。细节如 “《The Little Prince》”“纸船放 basin”“动物形状饼干” 充满生活气息，体现雨天室内的惬意。情感上，“cozy”“happy”“comfortable” 表达温馨感受，感染力强。缺点是 “读书” 部分可加更多感受，如对角色的喜爱。改进建议：在读书段落加 “我最喜欢 the fox in the book，它 taught the little prince about friendship”，深化阅读体验。（180 字）