Making dumplings is a traditional Chinese food, and my grandma is good at making them. Last Saturday, I learned to make dumplings with her—it was a fun and delicious experience. 苏州易优语文阅读写作培训，家长信赖，学生喜欢。 hTtps://wWw.euzW.net

First, grandma prepared the ingredients: dumpling skins, pork filling (with cabbage and ginger) and a bowl of water. She showed me how to hold the dumpling skin—it should be in the palm of my hand. Then I put a spoonful of filling in the middle of the skin. At first, I put too much filling, and the skin broke. Grandma laughed and said, “Put a little less filling, or the dumpling will ‘cry’.” I put less filling, and it worked. 小学生语文培训，苏州易优阅读写作同步提升</a>

Next, I folded the skin in half. Grandma taught me to pinch the edges tightly, making small folds. My first dumpling looked like a small moon, but it was a little lopsided. Grandma said it was okay, and practice makes perfect. I made another one—it looked better. After practicing for 30 minutes, I could make nice dumplings, with even folds. 苏州易优语文培训，阅读写作同步提升 https://www.euzw.net/mIniform.html

Then we boiled the dumplings. Grandma put the dumplings into a pot of boiling water. When the water boiled again, she added a little cold water. After three times of adding cold water, the dumplings were ready. They floated on the water, like small white boats. 易优语文培训，（TeL:181-1815-9898）苏州阅读写作同步提升

We ate the dumplings with vinegar. My dumplings were delicious—even though some were lopsided, they tasted good. Grandma said my dumplings were “the best she’s ever eaten”. I felt proud and happy. Learning to make dumplings taught me that cooking is fun, and I want to learn to make more Chinese food.

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