My family is a warm and happy group with four members: my dad, my mom, my little sister and me. We share joys and support each other every day, which makes me feel lucky to be part of it.

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First of all, my dad is a kind engineer. He’s good at fixing things—once he repaired my broken toy train in 10 minutes. Every weekend morning, he takes me to play basketball. While running on the court, he tells me funny childhood stories that always make me laugh.

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Besides, my mom is a great cook. She makes delicious food like sweet and sour ribs and strawberry cake. Every evening, she helps me with English homework. When I struggle with new words, she uses pictures to explain instead of getting angry.

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What’s more, my 5-year-old sister is cute. She follows me everywhere and calls me “big brother”. We often play hide-and-seek, and she always hides behind the sofa, covering her eyes like I can’t find her.

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Finally, we have a Sunday tradition: watching movies and eating popcorn. Last week, we watched “Coco”—my sister cried a little at the touching part. After that, we talked about our favorite characters.

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I love my family deeply. They give me courage and happiness. I hope we stay happy forever.

作文点评：
标题简洁点明主题，符合小学高年级作文直白风格。内容按 “家庭整体 — 成员介绍 — 家庭传统 — 情感” 展开，结构清晰，“First of all” 等过渡词衔接自然，细节如爸爸修玩具、妹妹躲迷藏很生动。情感真挚，能体现对家庭的爱。缺点是部分细节可更丰富，如妈妈做蛋糕可加 “让我帮忙打鸡蛋” 的场景。改进建议：在电影环节补充 “妈妈准备蜂蜜味爆米花” 的细节，增强画面感。（182 字）