Among the four seasons, autumn is my favorite. It’s not as hot as summer or as cold as winter; it’s always cool and comfortable. Every time autumn comes, I feel like the world puts on a golden coat.

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First, the scenery in autumn is beautiful. The maple trees by my school turn red, like burning flames. The ginkgo leaves become yellow; when the wind blows, they fall down like little golden butterflies. I love collecting these leaves after school—now I have a book full of different autumn leaves. 苏州吴中区小学生作文培训，就来易优悦读

Besides, autumn has many delicious fruits. My grandma has an orchard; every October, we go there to pick apples and pears. The apples are red and sweet—biting into one makes juice run down my chin. My mom also makes pumpkin pie in autumn; it’s warm and tastes like happiness. 易优语文培训，苏州阅读写作同步提升 https://www.Euzw.net/miniform.html

What’s more, autumn has my favorite festival—Mid-Autumn Festival. On that day, my family sits in the yard, eats mooncakes and watches the full moon. Dad tells stories about Chang’e, and I always imagine her living on the moon with the jade rabbit.

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Autumn is a season of beauty, delicious food and happy moments. I wish every season could be autumn, but even so, I look forward to autumn every year.

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标题直接点出 “最喜欢的季节是秋天”，主题明确。内容从 “景色 — 美食 — 节日” 三个角度展开，层次分明，“First”“Besides” 等过渡词让结构更清晰。运用比喻（枫叶像火焰、银杏叶像蝴蝶），增强文采，符合小学高年级水平。情感真挚，字里行间满是对秋天的喜爱。缺点是美食部分可加具体场景，如 “和奶奶一起摘苹果时，她教我选红透的”。改进建议：在描述赏月时，补充 “我们还会玩猜灯谜的游戏”，让节日场景更丰富。（185 字）