I have a lovely pet dog named Lucky. My dad brought him home on my 10th birthday, and now we’ve been together for two years. Lucky is not just a pet—he’s my best little friend. 苏州易优语文培训，阅读写作同步提升 https://www.euzw.net/mIniform.html

Lucky is a small golden retriever. He has soft golden fur that feels like cotton when I touch it. His eyes are big and round, like two black grapes. The most interesting thing is his tail—he wags it so hard when he sees me that his whole body shakes. Everyone who sees him says he’s cute.

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Every morning, Lucky wakes me up. He jumps onto my bed and licks my face gently. After I finish breakfast, he walks me to the bus stop. He sits there and watches the bus leave, and when I come back in the afternoon, he’s already waiting at the gate, holding his favorite toy in his mouth. 易优语文培训，（TEL:181-181-5-9898）,苏州中小学生阅读写作同步提升

Last month, I had a small accident and fell off my bike. Lucky ran to me immediately, barking loudly to call for help. When Mom came, he stayed by my side and licked my hand like he was comforting me. That day, I knew how much he cared about me.

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Lucky brings so much happiness to my life. I take him for walks every evening, and we play fetch in the park. I love him more than anything, and I promise to take good care of him forever.

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标题点明宠物狗名字，增加亲切感。内容从 “狗的来历 — 外貌 — 日常互动 — 感人事件 — 情感承诺” 展开，结构完整，过渡自然。外貌描写用比喻（毛像棉花、眼睛像葡萄），生动形象；日常互动和感人事件细节具体，体现深厚感情。情感真挚，能引发读者共鸣。缺点是 “日常互动” 部分可加更多趣事，如 “Lucky 学握手的过程”。改进建议：在结尾前加 “每次我难过时，Lucky 会趴在我脚边” 的细节，进一步体现它的陪伴。（180 字）