考研 英语作文 热门话题范文：网络的近与远
As is shown in the picture the humans (加who are)divided alone keep contact with each other by internet. Every one owns a computer ,which is their mainly(mainly为副词，用来修饰动词;mean为名词，需要用形容词来修饰，可改为main) mean(改为way或means，mean为“平均值，意思”；而means为“手段，方法 ”) to contact out(改为with the outside world).In addition,there are spider net between everyone(改为it just like a spider net),which lead the people alone.The picture revealed(时态保持一致，改为reveals) a current social phenomenon that people dependent(改为depend，从句谓语部分应用动词) extravagantly on the internet rather than the normal conversation. The spider net is a great metapho
