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考研英语作文考场范文批改及点评(2)

考研 英语作文 热门话题范文:男女比例
  In the picture,there is an unbalanced(改为imbalanced,imbalance表示“失衡,不平衡”,而unbalance表示“[力]失衡,精神错乱”) seesaw on which the one side sitting a woman with her body shaking(可改为where a women is sitting with her body shaking on the one side), and on the other side,15 men are going down on their knees asking(改为to ask,用动词不定时表示目的) the woman to marry them. The picture reveals the unbalanced(改为imbalanced)sex ratio in our country. So what causes this phenomenon?In my opinion, there are mainly two reasons. First, the conception "prefer sons to daughters" is very popular in our country. Through(改为Though,through为介词“通过”,though则表示“虽然”) it is not as intensive as in the old society, most parents,especially the ones in remote areas still want to have a son. Further more,

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