假如你们学校校报举行英语征文活动， 主题是“我心目中的成功人士”， 请你写一篇文章介绍一位你心目中的成功人士（可以使你身边熟悉的人或名人）。文章必须包含以下内容：1. 人物 简介；2. 人物 事迹；3. 给你的启发。（共1题，10分）
要求：
1）条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确、逻辑清晰；
2）假如写的是你身边的人物，文中不能呢个出现真实的姓名和校名；
3）80词左右。
参考范文：
范文一
A Successful Person in My Mind
The successful person in my mind is Lang Lang. He is one of the youngest and most famous pianists of our time. However, his success came at a price. He spent most of his time practicing playing the piano when he was a little boy. At the age of 17, he became famous after he was chosen to play at a musical event in the U. S. A. Lang Lang”s experiences tell me that hard work leads to success and chances belong to those who have made good preparations.
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范文二
A Successful Person in My Mind
Jim, one of my classmates, is a successful person in my mind.Jim does well in both his studies and sports. He has won a number of awards in many different competitions. What”s more, he is helpful and gets on well with the classmates and teachers.However, Jim”s success came through his day and night”s hard work.From his experiences, I understand he meaning of “No pains, no gains.” And I will try my best to realize my dream.
