Statement of Purpose, XX, Food Science PhD Thesis。这篇SOP写得较好，前半部分内容比后半部分的好。特别是后半部分呃逆荣，注意精炼语言。另外，需要注意一些细节上的处理方式。 The Motivation and Goal。Naturescience seems charming from my childhood, and I always eager to continue myacademic study in this field to turn out my interests and curiosities intorealities。
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Statement of Purpose, XX, Food Science PhD / Thesis
In this essay I outline my academic accomplishments and discuss my careerambitions and the motivation to pursue the graduate program in Food Scienceat the University of XX.
The Motivation and Goal
Naturescience seems charming from my childhood, and I always eager to continue myacademic study in this field to turn out my interests and curiosities intorealities. My father is an ichthyologist. Even though I was a child, I havebeen allowed to access the laboratory where my father and his colleagues devotemost of time
