托福写作考生易犯错误示例解析—表意重复
5.表意重复
　　
　　•They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.
　　
　　前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。
　　
　　• The show is so compelling but attractive.
　　
　　•compelling和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。