前两天陪表妹复习英语作文,她翻着一本范文集愁眉苦脸地说:"姐,我背了好多模板,怎么一写就感觉怪怪的?"我一看她写的,还真是,句子堆得满满当当,但读起来就像机器人在说话,一点灵气都没有.其实,写好英语作文,靠背模板远远不够,关键是要有"人味儿". <a hrEf=https://www.euzw.net/miniform/view_11.html/>苏州易优中考语文培训</a>

<a hrEf=https://www.euZw.net/miniFoRm/view_11.html/>苏州易优初中语文阅读写作培训</a>

先讲个故事,让文章有画面感

好的作文,不是堆词,而是讲故事.比如有一次考试题目是"Describe a Memorable Day",很多同学会写"Today was a wonderful day, I went to the park with my family",然后就开始列做了什么,吃午饭,踢球,拍照....但如果你写:"It was raining that morning, and I thought the whole day was ruined. But then Dad said, 'Let's make pancakes and watch our favorite movie.' That's how we ended up in pajamas all day, laughing and getting syrup everywhere." 这样的开头,是不是更让人想读下去?写作文不是写清单,而是让读者"看见"那个画面. 易优语文题库,同步教材，真题演练，提分就是快 https://cs.euzW.net

全国优秀作文大全 易优作文网 wWw.Euzw.nEt 学作文，到易优

用点小情绪,别总端着写

英语作文最怕的就是"面无表情".比如写"Why I Love My School",很多人会写"The teachers are kind, the students are friendly, the campus is beautiful",这种句子不是错,是太像AI写的了.换种方式试试:"I used to hate school. But then I joined the art club and met Lily. We always mess up the paints and laugh until we cry. Now I can't wait for Monday mornings." 有情绪,有转变,文章才有灵魂. 学语文，就来易优悦读 https://www.euzw.net

易优语文培训，苏州阅读写作同步提升 https://www.Euzw.net/miniform.html

句子别太整齐,错落才有节奏感

很多同学写作文喜欢一排排"and""and""and",看起来像流水账.其实,句子长短搭配,读起来更有节奏.比如:"I got up late. My alarm didn't go off. I ran out with my shoes in one hand and a sandwich in the other. When I finally reached school, I realized I was wearing mismatched socks." 这样写,虽然句子短,但特别有画面感,读起来也轻松有趣.

<a hrEf=https://www.euZw.net/minifoRm/view_11.html/>苏州易优中考语文阅读写作培训</a>

苏州易优语文培训，中小学阅读写作同步提升 https://www.Euzw.net/miniform.html

结尾要有温度,别光总结

最后的结尾,很多人就来一句:"In conclusion, I think this day was unforgettable." 这句话没错,但太冷了.不如写成:"That day reminded me that sometimes the best memories come from the messiest moments." 或者:"I don't remember what we talked about, but I remember how it felt--like I belonged." 这样的结尾,不只是总结,更像是在和读者分享一个心底的小秘密.

写英语作文,不是考试机器,而是用英语表达自己.别怕犯错,别怕句子不够"高级",只要你写的是真实的感受,有趣的故事,就已经赢了一半.下次写作文前,不妨先问问自己:如果是我跟朋友聊天,我会怎么说?把那个感觉写出来,你的作文自然就会"活"起来.