中考英语作文：英语作文书面表达说明介绍类

 【母题来源1】 

61. 假如你叫李华，你们学校刚刚开学，正在开展 “Happy Month”活动，请你以 “Learn to BeHappy”为题，给学校英语广播站写一篇广播稿，号召同学们返校后快乐生活。

内容包括:

1.新冠疫情使学校延迟开学;

2.通过上网课学习语文、数学和英语等课程;

3.“Happy, Month”活动和你的心情:

4.如何快乐生活(至少2点)。

写作要求:

1.结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰;

2.文中不得出现任何真实的人名和学校名称等信息；

3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：新型冠状病毒COVID—19

Learn to Be Happy

Good morning, everyone! We’re very happy to be back to school.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope all of us can live happily in this school. Thank you for your listening!

【写作思路】

本文是一篇材料作文，假如你是李华，学校刚刚开学，正在开展 “Happy Month”活动，要求你以 “Learn to Be Happy”为题，题干内容提示，给学校英语广播站写一篇广播稿，号召同学们返校后快乐生活。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

【参考范文】

Learn to Be Happy

Good morning ,everyone! I'm very happy to be back to school.

To prevent the Corid-19, our school has delayed (put off) the opening of this term. But we didn't stop studying. Our school gave us online courses such as Chinese, Math, English and so on. We were very happy.

Now our school is carrying out the plan“happy Month”. How to be happy? First, I think we should have life aims ,with life aims, we can live a happy and meaningful life. Then, we must keep healthy. What’s more, we should be ready to help others.

I hope all of us can live happily in this school. Thank you for your listening!

【名师点评】

1.例文点评：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

2.高分亮点：

短语：put off，such as，so on，keep healthy，be ready to。

句型：I think we should have life aims. 我认为我们应该有生活目标。I think后接宾语从句。

  What’s more, we should be ready to help others. 更重要的是，我们应该准备好帮助别人。be ready to do sth.准备好做某事。

【母题来源2】

80.假如你是中学生李平，曾经在你们班学习的交换生Peter看了你发布的朋友圈，他对你们班上周举行的主题班会很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息给他写一封信，向他介绍班会的情况并和他交流一下中学生如何才能实现自己的理想。

写作要点：

1.班会的主题：我的理想

2.介绍你和几名同学的理想：

（1）赵勇：想成为一名勇敢的警察；

（2）张红：想做一名志愿者；

（3）你：想成为一名优秀的医生。

3.说说中学生如何才能实现（realize）自己的理想（ideal）。

写作要求：

1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

4.至少80词。

Dear peter,

I'm writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ping

【写作思路】

这是一篇话题作文，介绍班会情况，班会的主题是谈论理想，通过分析可知，除了短文开头介绍上周班会情况，我们应该使用一般过去时态，其他内容可以使用一般现在时和一般将来时，注意谓语动词要随着时态和人称的变化而改变。

【参考范文】

Dear peter,

I'm writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. The theme of it was “My Ideal”. Our monitor hosted the meeting. During it, all of us took an active part in the discussion and shared our opinions with each other.

Zhao Yong is going to be a brave policeman. He hopes to help people in danger. Zhang Hong wants to be a volunteer, she will help people in need especially the disabled and the homeless. My dream is to be an excellent doctor, I think it’s a meaningful job, because I can save people’s lives and help them out of danger.

To realize our ideals, I have some opinions. Firstly, we must try to work harder from now on and learn as much knowledge as possible. Secondly, we should believe ourselves, because confidence is the key to success. Besides, it’s also important to find out how successfully people did it so that we can learn from them.

Best wishes!

                                                Yours,

Li Ping

【名师点评】

1.例文点评：例文采用分段式，文中衔接流畅，在写作的时候选择了一些相对高级的词汇，也运用多种句型，句式丰富多彩，避免单一化，增加了文章的亮点，润色了文章的内容。

2.高分亮点：

短语：host the meeting；take an active part in；in danger；a meaningful job；from now on；learn from。

句型：① I think it’s a meaningful job, because I can save people’s lives and help them out of danger.

②Secondly, we should believe ourselves, because confidence is the key to success.

③Besides, it’s also important to find out how successfully people did it so that we can learn from them.

【母题来源3】

81.为加强机场服务工作，现面向社会招募志愿者，若你具备以下条件，请致电：63688881。

1）身体健康；2）性格善良、有耐心；3）擅长与人沟通；4）会讲汉语和英语。

请根据以上信息，用5-6句话写一份招聘广告。

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【参考范文】

Volunteers wanted

We need volunteers at the airport. Are you in good health? Are you kind and patient? Are you good at communicating with people? Can you speak both Chinese and English? Please call us at 63688881.

【母题来源4】

83.仔细观察图片描述，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。

12 3.45.

提示词：mask（口罩）；keep a certain distance（保持一定距离）

要求：1. 话题作文或图示作文任选其一。

2. 词数：80-100之间。

3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

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【写作思路】

本题属于图画作文。要求观察图片，展开合理想象来写一篇作文。观察图片及提示词可知这里是五条关于预防新型冠状病毒肺炎的建议。写作时要紧扣图片内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。

【参考范文】

Novel coronavirus is spreading around the world and many countries are fighting against it. We should do something to avoid it.

Here is my advice for everyone. Firstly, if we have to go out, we must wear masks to protect ourselves. Secondly, we should always wash hands to keep germs away. Thirdly, we need to open the windows very often to let the fresh air in. Fouthly, we should take our temperature often and if we have a fever we should go to the doctor in time. Finally, keeping a certain distance with others is also very important.

【名师点评】

1. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，从图片内容延伸出5条预防新型冠状病毒肺炎的建议，用上了所给提示词并进行了适当发挥。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
2. 高分亮点：
单词和短语：spread；around the world；fight against；avoid；wear masks；keep germs away；take one's temperature；have a fever；in time；keep a certain distance。
句型：and连接的并列句；以here开头的倒装句；if引导的条件状语从句。

【母题来源5】

61.假设你是Angelica的朋友Alan，请根据第二节（回答问题）材料并按照提示给Angelica回信：1. 恭喜乔迁并简单评述其新居。2. 回复能否参加聚会。3. 若能参加聚会，你会准备什么节目，对整个活动有什么建议等；若不能参会，说明原因，表达自己的心情等。注意：1. 80词以上，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；2. 不得出现人名和校名等真实信息。

Dear Angelica,

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Alan

【写作思路】

这是一篇书信作文。本文要求按照提示要点写一封回信，写作中注意要包含所有的提示要点，可适当发挥。时态以一般现在时为主，人称是第一人称。

【参考范文】

Dear Angelica,

I’m glad to receive your letter last time. First of all, congratulations on your settlement to the new house，which is so warm and comfortable that I’d like to have a look at once. The small independent garden is the best design in the house, and also a good place to relax. Secondly, I really appreciate your invitation of the housewarming party. I’d love to, but I can’t. As you know, the National Piano Grading Test is coming, my course schedule on these days is already full. I have to devote myself to the preparation until the end of the test. At last, it’s a great pity that I can’t come to your party. But I’ve prepared a gift for you and I hope you will like it.

May your party be a great success and enjoy yourself that day!

 Yours,

Alan

【名师点评】

1.例文点评：本文采用两段式，第一段：（1）恭喜对方乔迁之喜；（2）告诉对方因为要准备钢琴等级考试无法参加聚会；（3）表示很遗憾并准备了礼物；第二段以祝福结尾。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，结构清晰，语言表达到位。

2.高分亮点：

短语：be glad to；so…that…；would like (love) to；have a look；at once；have to；devote myself to；prepare for；the end of；enjoy yourself。

句型：First of all…Secondly…At last…；which引导的非限制性定语从句；so…that…引导的结果状语从句；and并列句；but并列复合句；As you know…；it’s +名词+ that从句。

【命题意图】

考查学生的基础英语和逻辑写作能力。

【考试方向】

说明介绍类书面表达。

【得分要点】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

【母题1】【来源】

减负之后，同学们有了更多的课余时间。请你根据下图提示，以"How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?"为题，用英语写一篇短文(100词左右)。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。

How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?

Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?

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【答案】One possible version:

How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?

Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?

In my opinion, it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves. I think sports have become more and more important in people's life. We can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those who are in need.

In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and make it more meaningful.

【解析】

【详解】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文。主要以“How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful”为主题展开的描写，根据题目中给出的图片提示具体的描写，要包括每一个细节，同时还要有自己的意见，要注意文章的层次以及语言的逻辑性。

2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段总体抛出文章的主题“该如何利用业余时间”；第二段具体的从各个方面介绍业余时间要做的事情；第三段总结要充分利用业余时间。整个文章结构完整，思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当合理，意思明确易懂。

3. 高分亮点：

短语：in my opinion；get close to；do sports；What’s more；in a word；make full use of。

句型：I think+宾语从句；who引导的定语从句；let’s祈使句。

【母题2】【来源】

一个人可以非常清贫、困顿、低微，但是不可以没有梦想。只要梦想一天，只要梦想存在一天， 就可以改变自己的处境。——奥普拉

初中三年，你一定遇到过很多困难，但最终梦想给了你勇气，帮助你战胜了困难。某英文报社以“梦想的力量”为话题展开征文活动。请你用英文写篇短文给报社投稿，谈谈你在梦想的力量下战胜困难的一次经历，以及你的收获感受。 

提示词语： dream, power, remember, defeat, proud

提示问题：

●What was your dream?

●How did your dream help you to overcome a difficulty?

●What have you learnt from the experience?

Everybody has a big dream. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

Everybody has a big dream. A life without a dream is a life without a sun. Therefore, in no circumstances can we give up our dream. Unquestionably, dreams are of great importance.

My dream is to be a reporter. To achieve my dream, I have to work hard to enter the best high school in my town. I still remember when I failed my math exam last month, I was so sad and upset that I was ready to give up my math. In my mind, I was a stupid girl who wasn’t good at it, it was so difficult for me to work out the problems. Luckily, my dream encouraged me to walk further and cheered me up. It is like a good friend and always gives me a lot of energy and power to defeat the failure.

I realize no matter how difficult the road is, I should try my best to keep walking to reach the end of the road. And my dream is always guiding me correctly.

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于材料写作。写作时要注意问题信息要写齐全。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式，第一大段说梦想的重要性；第二大段陈述我的梦想是什么，梦想在一次经历中给我的力量；第三大段陈述从这次事件中的收获，结构清晰，段落分明。用第一人称来进行写作分析；时态采用一般过去时为主。

3.高分亮点：

短语：give up，work hard，be ready to，encourage sb. to do sth.，cheer me up，work out。

句型：so ... that引导的结果状语从句，who引导的定语从句，when引导的时间状语从句。

【母题3】【来源】

2020年春节期间，“新型冠状病毒肺炎”爆发,全国展开了抗击病毒的斗争，你们班就此召开了一次主题班会讨论如何预防“新型冠状病毒肺炎”，请你根据提示内容写一篇英语短文，介绍新型冠状病毒肺炎的症状及预防方法。

要求：1.文中需包含参考词汇中的主要内容；

2.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯,书写规范；

3.可做适量拓展；

4.文中不得提及考生个人的相关信息,如人名、校名或地名等；

5.词数:100词左右。(开头需抄写在答题卡对应作答区域,不计入总词数)

6. 参考词汇：新型冠状病毒 COVID19; 口罩mask; 疾病 disease; 感染 infect

be infected by COVID-19：have a sore throat； have a high fever and cough ；hard to breathe

protect ourselves：stay at home；take temperature every day; wear a mask；wash our hands; have a healthy diet;  do more exercise

During the Spring Festival of 2020, a very serious disease caused by COVID-19 spread around China, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文：

During the Spring Festival of 2020, a very serious disease caused by COVID-19 spread around China. If you are infected by COVID-19, you may have a sore throat, have a high fever and cough, or you may feel hard to breathe. It’s urgent for you to seek medical attention, and follow the directions of your local health official. How to keep ourselves safe from COVID19？ Here are some ways.

First, don’t go to places full of people, such as hospitals, railway stations and airports. Wear a mask if transport or movement is necessary. Second, wash our hands frequently and properly. It’s necessary to wash hands with soap and running water thoroughly for at least 15 seconds. Third, we’d better stay at home and take temperature every day. Finally, we can have a healthy diet and do more exercise. Regular exercise is one of the most important ways to keep infection at bay.

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据内容提示介绍新型冠状病毒肺炎的症状及预防方法。

2.例文点评：例文主要用第一人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。介绍预防方法分四点来写，叙述完整且条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：

短语：are infected by；have a sore throat；have a high fever；seek medical attention；keep ourselves safe from；full of；at least；stay at home; take temperature; have a healthy diet; do more exercise; keep infection at bay。

句型：it做形式主语的句子；if引导的条件状语从句；and表示并列的句子。

【母题4】【来源】

假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。

要点 提示如下：

1.几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞。

2.从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。

3.现在，奶奶比以前更健康了，有很多朋友。

4.有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。

5.你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但------

参考词汇：

跳广场舞 do square dancing      （对某人）有意见 have a complaint (against sb.)

写作要求：1.词数：80-100 个

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

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【答案】例文

Boys and girls

　　I'm very happy to speak here and I'd like to talk about my grandma.

　　A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What's more, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can't fall asleep at night.

　　In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn't make a lot of noise.

　　That's all. Thank you!

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。内容是根据下面提供的材料就“奶奶跳广场舞”这一问题写发言稿，在兴趣活动小组里发言。我们可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：1. 先介绍奶奶喜欢广场舞及跳舞后的变化。2. 然后写跳广场舞缺点。3. 发表自己的观点。4. 注意一些过渡词 since then, however, in my opinion, but等。

2.例文点评：例文采用四段式；时态主要为一般现在时。人称主要为第三人称。第一段介绍奶奶喜欢广场舞及跳舞后的变化。第二段介绍跳广场舞缺点。第三段发表自己的观点。最后致谢。

3.高分亮点：

短语：be in love with；What’s more；have a complaint；a good way to do…；keep healthy；make a lot of noise。

句型：1.  Now, she is much healthier than before. 现在，她比以前健康多了。

由比较连词than，可知这是一个含有比较级的句子。much+形容词比较级+than+比较的对象。

2. They think that the music is so loud that they can't fall asleep at night.

他们认为音乐如此大声，他们不能在晚上入睡。

本句主要运用了so…that…句型。表示：如此……以至于……，引导结果状语从句。

3. they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn't make a lot of noise.

他们应该考虑别人的感受，他们不应该制造太多的噪音。

and 连接两个并列分句，分别叙述了应该怎样做，不应该怎样做。

【母题5】【来源】

假如你是李华，你有一个出生成长在美国的小堂弟李小华，他在上次的电子邮件中请求你给他讲一个中国民间故事以帮助他完成一项作业，故请你给李小华回复一封电子邮件,邮件内容应该包括以下内容：

1、讲述一个趣味中国民间故事:

2、告诉他你从这个故事中学到的东西;

3、鼓励他学习汉语和传播中华传统文化。

要求:

1、语句通顺、语法正确、句式多样;

2、100 词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。

Dear cousin Xiaohua,

How's it going with you in America? At your request, I will tell you an interesting Chinese folk story.

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Your sincere cousin,

Li Hua

【答案】例文：

Dear cousin Xiaohua,

How's it going with you in America? At your request, I will tell you an interesting Chinese folk story.

Thousands of years ago, there was a farmer in China. He did the farm work very hard every day. However, he gained little. One day, when he was on the farm, suddenly, a rabbit ran into a tree nearby, then died. He got a rabbit for supper without any work. So he decided to wait for more and more rabbits to come and run into the tree. Finally, he waited and waited and watched. His field lay waste, but he never got a second rabbit. This story tells us that no pains, no gains. One can’t own fortune all the time, if you want to get something, you must make your efforts.

Our great traditional culture makes a difference to the world, nowadays, our country is becoming stronger and stronger. You should learn Chinese well and spread Chinese traditional culture to the world. Do you think so? I’m looking forward to your e-mail.

                                                            Your sincere cousin,

Li Hua

【解析】1.题干解读：这是一篇书信作文，要求回复一封电子邮件，根据题目要求内容要包括三个要点，这样写作才能要点齐全，表达通顺。另外，讲述故事部分应用一般过去时，其余部分要根据写作的内容选用恰当的人称和时态。 

2.例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。

3.高分亮点：    

短语：thousands of years ago； on the farm；run into a tree；without any work；wait for；all the time；make a difference；look forward to。

句型：①宾语从句 This story tells us that no pains, no gains. 

②条件状语从句 One can’t own fortune all the time, if you want to get something, you must make your efforts.