中考英语满分作文解析（9）

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据悉，我国青少年的近视率居全球第一，70%的学生有视力方面的问题．为引起广大青少年的重视，某英语报刊正在开展以" Saving Our Eyesight"为题的征文活动．请根据以下提示写一篇短文投稿，分析造成青少年近视的原因并提出保护视力的合理建议．

要求：

1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范．

2．所有提示须全部用上，并作适当发挥．

3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名．

4. 80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）．

Saving Our Eyesight

    As the saying goes， "Eyes are the window to the soul（心灵 ） "However， 70% of us have poor eyesight． What has caused this problem？______________________________________________________

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In a word， lets take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future．

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