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Watching English cartoons is my favorite way. I like 《Peppa Pig》 best. Every evening, I watch one episode with English subtitles. I learn many daily words from it, like “breakfast” “rainbow” and “picnic”. When Peppa says “I love muddy puddles!”, I repeat it after her. Soon, I can remember the words easily because they are in interesting sentences.

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Singing English songs also helps. Our English teacher, Mr. Brown, teaches us a new English song every month. Last month, we learned 《You Are My Sunshine》. I practice singing it at home, and my mom sings with me. Singing makes me remember the words faster, and I feel happy when I sing well. Sometimes, I even sing for my friends at school.

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Speaking English is important too. Mr. Brown sets up an “English Corner” every Friday. We talk about small things, like “What did you eat for lunch?” or “What’s your favorite toy?” At first, I only said short sentences, but now I can talk for a long time. Last week, I talked about my pet dog with Lily—she said my English was good, and I felt proud.

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English learning is not boring anymore. These fun ways help me learn better. I want to keep learning English and one day talk with foreign friends.

作文点评：
标题 “Learning English with Fun” 点明核心 —— 快乐学英语，主题明确。内容按 “过去恐惧 — 看动画学 — 唱歌学 — 说英语 — 总结” 展开，对比鲜明，“But”“also”“too” 等过渡词衔接流畅。细节如 “看《Peppa Pig》”“唱《You Are My Sunshine》”“英语角对话” 真实贴近学生学习生活，有借鉴意义。情感上，从 “害怕” 到 “热爱” 的转变自然，体现学习成就感。缺点是 “记单词” 可补充具体方法，如制作单词卡。改进建议：在看动画段落加 “我把难记的单词写在卡片上，贴在书桌前，每天看几遍”，让方法更具体。（183 字）