
Drawing is my favorite hobby. I started drawing when I was 6 years old, and now I draw every day after finishing homework. Drawing makes me feel relaxed and happy, like entering a colorful world.
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I like drawing many things. My favorite is drawing animals—cats, dogs, pandas and birds. I often sit in the park on weekends, watching the birds and drawing them in my sketchbook. Last month, I drew a picture of a cat sleeping on a windowsill. I used soft brown colors for the cat’s fur and blue for the window. My mom liked it so much that she put it on the fridge.
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I also like drawing landscapes. When we went to the mountains last summer, I drew the green trees, the blue sky and the small river. I used different green colors for the trees—dark green for the old trees and light green for the new leaves. My art teacher, Ms. Zhang, saw the picture and praised me, saying the colors were beautiful and the picture looked lively.
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Drawing helps me express my feelings. When I’m happy, I draw bright and colorful pictures, like rainbows and flowers. When I’m sad, I draw quiet pictures, like a moonlit night. After drawing, my bad mood always goes away. I also like sharing my drawings with my friends—Lucy says my drawings make her happy too. 苏州吴中区小学生作文培训,就来易优悦读
I want to keep drawing. I hope one day I can become a good artist and draw many beautiful pictures for people to see.
作文点评:
标题明确 “爱好是画画”,主题聚焦。内容按 “画画习惯 — 喜欢画的类型(动物、风景)— 画画的好处 — 未来愿望” 展开,结构清晰,“also”“When” 等过渡词自然。细节如 “画猫贴冰箱”“画 mountain 风景受表扬” 真实具体,体现画画热情;“用颜色表达情绪” 的描写独特,展现观察力。情感上,“relaxed”“happy”“passion” 等词真挚表达对画画的热爱。缺点是 “画画经历” 可加一次比赛经历,丰富内容。改进建议:在结尾前加 “去年我参加学校画画比赛,画了一只熊猫,获得了三等奖”,增强成就感。(182 字)
