Last Sunday, my dad took me to the city science museum. I’ve wanted to go there for a long time because my classmates said it was very interesting. When we arrived, I saw a big building with a glass wall—it looked modern and cool.

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First, we went to the space exhibition area. There was a model of a spaceship and a simulation of the moon surface. I put on a small spacesuit (it was a toy one) and stood on the “moon surface”—it felt soft, like walking on sand. The guide told us that the moon has no air, so astronauts have to wear spacesuits. I also saw a model of the solar system—Jupiter was much bigger than the other planets, and Saturn had beautiful rings. 小学生语文培训，苏州易优阅读写作同步提升</a>

Then we went to the robot area. There were many robots: some could dance, some could talk, and one could even draw pictures. I talked to a small robot—it asked me “What’s your name?” and “How old are you?” I answered, and it nodded and said “Nice to meet you!” I also watched a robot dance show—the robots moved to the music, and everyone clapped. 找中小学生语文题库，就搜微信“易优阅读宝”

After that, we went to the experiment area. The guide did a fun experiment: she put a balloon on a bottle and put the bottle in hot water. The balloon got bigger! She explained that hot air expands. I wanted to try, so she let me hold the bottle—it was warm. I learned that science is all around us. 苏州易优吴老师中考语文阅读写作培训（TEL:181-1815-9898）

We left the museum at 4 p.m. I bought a small robot model as a souvenir. This trip to the science museum was not only fun but also educational. I learned a lot of science knowledge and want to come again.

作文点评：
标题点明 “参观科学博物馆”，兼具趣味性与教育性。内容按 “太空展区 — 机器人展区 — 实验区 — 返程” 的游览顺序写，逻辑连贯，“First, Then, After that” 等过渡词清晰。细节如 “穿玩具宇航服”“和机器人对话”“气球实验” 生动有趣，符合科学博物馆特色，传递科学知识。情感上，“interesting”“fun”“educational” 表达对此次 trip 的喜爱，体现科学的魅力。缺点是 “实验区” 可补充更多实验，如浮力实验。改进建议：在实验段落加 “我们还看了浮力实验，鸡蛋在盐水里会浮起来，在清水里会沉下去”，增加知识广度。（183 字）