Last December 25th was Christmas Day, and our class celebrated it together at school. We planned the celebration for a week, and everyone was excited. 小学生语文培训，苏州易优阅读写作同步提升</a>

On Christmas Eve, we decorated our classroom. We hung colorful Christmas lights on the blackboard and put a small Christmas tree in the corner. The tree was covered with small gifts, colorful balls and golden ribbons. I made a paper snowflake and hung it on the tree. Tom brought a big Santa Claus doll—we put it next to the tree. The classroom looked bright and festive, like a Christmas wonderland.

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On Christmas morning, we brought small gifts to school. We put all the gifts in a big box, and then each of us picked a gift from the box. I picked a gift from Lucy—it was a small notebook with a Christmas tree on the cover. I gave my gift (a box of colored pencils) to Mike; he smiled and said “thank you” happily.

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After class, we had a small party. We sang Christmas songs like 《Jingle Bells》—Mr. Brown played the guitar for us. Then we played a game called “Find the Christmas Gift”—Ms. Wang hid small candies around the classroom, and we looked for them. I found three candies, and I shared one with my deskmate Lily. We also ate Christmas cookies that Ms. Wang made—they were shaped like stars and snowflakes.

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Celebrating Christmas with classmates was so fun. We sang, laughed and shared gifts. I will remember this happy Christmas forever.

作文点评：
标题明确 “和同学过圣诞”，主题聚焦校园节日庆祝。内容按 “装饰教室 — 交换礼物 — 举办派对 — 总结” 展开，结构完整，“On Christmas Eve, On Christmas morning, After class” 等过渡词明确时间线。细节如 “纸雪花”“交换礼物”“唱《Jingle Bells》” 充满圣诞氛围，真实还原班级庆祝场景。情感上，“excited”“happy”“fun” 表达节日快乐，易引发共鸣。缺点是 “派对” 可加更多互动，如表演节目。改进建议：在派对段落加 “Lucy danced to a Christmas song, and we all clapped for her”，丰富派对内容。（180 字）