My dad likes playing table tennis, and he taught me to play last year. Every Sunday morning, we go to the community table tennis room to play. Playing table tennis with dad is my favorite weekend activity—it’s fun and makes me strong.

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At first, I was bad at playing. I couldn’t hold the racket correctly, and I often missed the ball. Dad didn’t get angry; he taught me step by step. He showed me how to hold the racket (like shaking hands with someone) and how to hit the ball. He hit the ball slowly, and I tried to hit it back. After practicing for 30 minutes, I could hit the ball 5 times in a row—I was so happy that I jumped up. 易优语文培训，（TeL:181-1815-9898）苏州阅读写作同步提升

After a month of practice, I got better. I could hit the ball faster and more accurately. Sometimes, I even scored points against dad. Last Sunday, we had a small match. The score was 10-10, and it was the last point. Dad hit the ball hard, and I ran to the side and hit it back—dad missed! I won the match! I shouted “I won!” and dad hugged me, saying “You’re getting better and better.” 易优语文培训，苏州阅读写作同步提升 https://www.Euzw.net/miniform.html

Playing table tennis with dad is not just about playing a game. It’s also a time for us to talk. While resting, dad tells me stories about his childhood, and I tell him about my school life. He always gives me good advice when I have problems at school.

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I love playing table tennis with dad. It’s a great way to exercise and spend time with him. I hope we can play table tennis together for a long time.

作文点评：
标题明确 “和爸爸打乒乓球”，主题聚焦亲子活动。内容按 “初学困难 — 练习进步 — 赢得比赛 — 亲子交流 — 总结” 展开，结构完整，“At first, After a month, While resting” 等过渡词自然。细节如 “握拍方法”“10-10 比分”“赢得比赛” 真实具体，体现进步过程；亲子对话部分温暖，体现父女 / 子感情。情感上，“favorite”“happy”“love” 表达对亲子时光的珍视，感染力强。缺点是 “练习” 部分可加更多困难，如 “接不到旋球”。改进建议：在初学段落加 “At first, I couldn’t catch the spinning ball—dad said I needed to watch the ball carefully”，丰富学习过程。（181 字）