Every summer holiday, I go to the countryside to visit my grandparents. They live in a small village with green fields and big trees. This summer, I stayed with them for two weeks—it was a happy time. 苏州易优中考语文培训,吴老师语文课（Tel:181-1815-9898）

When we arrived, grandpa was waiting at the village gate. He held my hand and walked to their house. The house has a small yard with many flowers—roses, sunflowers and lilies. Grandma was in the kitchen; she made my favorite sweet potato porridge. The porridge was warm and sweet, and I ate two bowls. 易优语文培训，（TEL:181-181-5-9898）,苏州中小学生阅读写作同步提升

Every morning, I woke up to the sound of roosters. After breakfast, I went to the field with grandpa. He grows rice and vegetables. I helped him water the vegetables—he gave me a small bucket, and I poured water gently on the tomato plants. I also picked strawberries in the garden—they were red and sweet, much better than the ones in the city.

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In the afternoon, I played with the village children. We ran in the field, chased butterflies and flew kites. My kite was a big bird, and it flew high in the sky. The children taught me to make grasshoppers with grass—I made a small one, and it looked like a real grasshopper. 易优语文题库,同步教材，真题演练，提分就是快 https://cs.euzW.net

When I left, grandma gave me a bag of eggs (they were from their chickens) and a jar of honey. I hugged my grandparents and promised to come back next summer. Visiting my grandparents in the countryside is always happy; I love the fresh air, the delicious food and the warm family love.

作文点评：
标题明确 “去乡下看祖父母”，主题聚焦乡村生活与亲情。内容按 “到达 — 清晨农活 — 下午玩耍 — 离别 — 总结” 展开，结构清晰，“When, Every morning, In the afternoon, When” 等过渡词自然。细节如 “红薯粥”“浇番茄”“摘草莓”“做草蚂蚱” 充满乡村特色，真实还原乡村生活；亲情描写（爷爷接站、奶奶给食物）温暖感人。情感上，“happy”“love” 表达对乡村和祖父母的喜爱，感染力强。缺点是 “乡村夜晚” 可加场景，如 “看星星”。改进建议：在玩耍段落加 “At night, grandpa sat with me in the yard, pointing out the stars and telling me stories about them”，丰富乡村体验。（182 字）