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关键核心技术要不来、买不来、讨不来，只有把关键核心技术掌握在自己手中，才能从根本上保障国家经济安全、国防安全和其它安全。一方面，涉及方方面面的主体。广大科技工作者要有强烈的创新信心和决心，攻坚克难、追求卓越，把创新主动权、发展主动权牢牢掌握在自己手中。政府要加快转变科技管理职能，着眼破除一切制约科技创新的思想障碍和制度藩篱，实行“揭榜挂帅”制度，在实践载体、政策保障、环境营造、创新主体等方面持续发力，最大限度解放和激发科技作为第一生产力所蕴藏的巨大潜能。企业是创新的主体，要努力建成核心技术能力突出、集成创新能力强的创新领军型企业，加快打通技术突破、产品制造、产业发展“一条龙”模式。另一方面，包括层层相扣的环节。重视基础研究，瞄准世界科技前沿，下好先手棋，甘坐冷板凳、实现前瞻性技术研究、原创成果、“卡脖子”领域取得重大突破。重视成果转化，疏通应用基础研究和产业化对接快车道，加快实现创新链和产业链精准对接，把科技创新成果充分应用到现代化事业当中。重视人才培养。加快形成充分激发人才积极性、能动性、创造性的极致环境，打造一流科研平台，汇聚全球优秀人才；推进人才评价科学化、专业化、社会化，形成人才自由流动的开放环境。 <A hRef=htTps://Www.EuZw.net/MiNifoRm.Html>苏州中小学生作文培训班</a>

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 嫦娥五号探月成功激发了同学们学科学、用科学的兴趣。假如你是李华，你校将在本周日举办“带你认识嫦娥五号”科技节活动，你打算邀请外教Peter Smith参加。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他科技节活动的时间和地点，活动内容，以及他需要做什么准备。

提示词语：hall, video, speech, explain, explore, knowledge, camera

提示问题：

● When and where will you have the Science and Technology Festival?

● What will you do at the festival?

● What do you advise Peter to prepare for the festival?

【答案】

Dear Peter,

How is it going? I’m writing to invite you to take part in the Science and Technology Festival named “Introduce you to Chang’e-5”.

We will have the Science and Technology Festival in our school hall at 10:00 a.m. on Sunday. We will watch videos of Chang’e-5. There will be some speeches about it, too. Our teachers will explain the knowledge to us and encourage us to explore outer space. There will be a lot of interesting things for us to enjoy, so don’t forget to take your camera to record the beautiful moments.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容邀请外教Peter Smith参加来参加科技节活动，注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般将来时。作文要介绍科技节的时间和地点，科技节上会做什么以及给Peter什么建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

B

科学技术是第一生产力。处于一个飞速发展的时代，我们的生活无时无刻不受到科技的影响。哪个科技的产物对你的生活影响最大？请结合以下要点，用英语写一篇文章。

要点：

1.是什么影响了你的生活?

2.它是如何影响你的生活的?

3.从中你有何感悟?

要求：

1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2.100词左右；

3.不得使用真实姓名和班级。

________ has/have influenced my life

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

The Internet has influenced my life

Many inventions have changed our life. As far as I am concerned, the Internet is a useful invention and it influences my life most.

Every day I surf the Internet and get information from it. I can keep in touch with my friends and family. Besides, I can buy goods from all over the world. More importantly, I can know more through the Internet, and it opens up my eyes. It can not only help me with my study, but also help me relax.

All in all, thanks to the Internet, my life becomes more convenient than ever.

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。首先就“科技影响生活”这个话题，把题目补充完整。第一段点出对自己影响最大的那个科技是什么；第二段叙述如何影响自己的生活；最后一段描述自己的感受。

2.写作指导：写作时采用一般现在时为主，使用第一人称，按照题目要点和要求，保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

C

请根据下表中提供的信息，用英语写一篇有关中国成功地发射“嫦娥二号”探月卫星的报道。词数80个左右。

参考词汇：绕月卫星 circumlunar satellite

嫦娥2号 Chang'e­2 lunar probe/Chang'e­2 lunar satellite

月球探测卫星 lunar probe/lunar exploration satellite/lunar orbiter

收集月球表面数据 collect lunar surface data

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Chang'e 2 was scheduled for launch on October 1st, 2010, the national day of China. Chang'e 2 is China's second lunar orbiter. It is modeled after Chang'e 1 with some improvements including a better camera with higher resolution. Chang'e 2 will be traveling 100 kilometers above the moon for 120 hours. Its goal is to collect lunar surface data. All this shows that the development of science and technology in China has reached a high level. In the future, I believe that we will explore the universe further and further.

【解析】

这是一篇图表，要求介绍有关中国成功地发射“嫦娥二号”探月卫星的报道。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

D

科技与生活息息相关。本期《科学世界》杂志在盘点今年的“黑科技”时列举里其中两项备受关注的发明物，请你根据下表信息选择一项发明物进行介绍，须适当展开，并发表自己观点不少于80词（开头已给，不计入总字数）。

参考词汇：take aerial（航空的） photos； attack（偷袭） enemies in a war, traffic jam（堵车）

With the rapid development of technology, great inventions are playing an important role in our life. The     is one of the most popular inventions today._________________________________________________________

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【答案】

With the rapid development of technology, great inventions are playing an important role in our life. The driver-less car is one of the most popular inventions today. It was invented in the 1970s. It has many advantages. It can stop people from making careless mistakes, so that it can slash accidents. It also causes less pollution. It helps improve fuel efficiency and reduces greenhouse gas emissions. It gives drivers more free time, drivers no longer need to be nervous to watch the road conditions. What’s more, it helps relieve the traffic pressure. However, it has many disadvantages. It’s very expensive. It makes drivers lose jobs. I except to own a driverless car one day.

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。选一项发明物，从发明时间，优点和缺点等方面进行介绍。

2.写作指导：本文采用的是第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。注意保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，句子通顺，无语法和标点错误。

E

未来遥不可及，又好像就在眼前。随着科技的不断发展，未来的生活会是什么样的呢？请你以Life in the future为题，根据图表的提示，谈谈对未来生活的畅想。

注意：

（1）参考词汇：智能的intelligent

（2）词数80左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）。

（3）不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

With the development of technology, life will change a lot in the future. ______________________________

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【答案】

Clothing will be light. It can be warm when we feel cold in winter and can be cool when we feel hot in summer. There will be more kinds of food we can choose, they are healthier and more delicious. We needn’t eat much but we will be full of energy. The houses we live will be greener and more comfortable. They will be so intelligent that robots will do all the housework. Besides, travelling will be very convenient. Cars will have wings to fly and they can change into a ship easily to go under the sea.

How great it will be in the future! we hope our dream will come true one day.

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇命题作文，根据图表信息来写的一篇作文，要求是未来遥不可及，又好像就在眼前。随着科技的不断发展，未来的生活会是什么样的呢？请你以Life in the future为题，根据图表的提示，谈谈对未来生活的畅想。

2.例文点评：结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，本文结构紧凑，语言简练。是一篇不错的文章。

3.高分亮点：

短语：be full of energy；do all the housework；change into；under the sea；come true。

句型：There will be more kinds of food we can choose there be句型的一般将来时；We needn’t eat much but we will be full of energy.；How great it will be in the future!感叹句。

F

科技改变生活方式，给人们带来了极大的便利，如支付宝（Ali-pay）、高铁（High Speed Rail）、微信（WeChat）等。

请以“Chinese Way of Life with High-Tech”为题，举例描述科技如何改变我们的生活方式，让外国友人了解生活在中国的便利和舒适。

要求：

（1）文中不可出现真实的个人身份信息。

（2）词数约110词，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Chinese Way of Life with High-Tech

With the rapid development of our economy, ____________________________________________________

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【答案】

Chinese Way of Life with High-Tech

With the rapid development of our economy, high technology brings convenience to our life.

Firstly, there are some shared-bikes around us. They’re very helpful and convenient for us to travel to places not too far away from our home. Secondly, you can see High Speed Rail everywhere in China. Taking high-speed train is not only comfortable, but also saves time. As for payment, we have many choices. We don’t have to carry cash. Electronic payment called WeChat pay or Ali-pay is widely used in daily life, making payment much safer and more convenient. In addition, we communicate a lot in ways like WeChat and QQ, which are quicker and more efficient.

All in all, our life will become more comfortable and convenient.

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。题目要求是根据提示内容以“Chinese Way of Life with High-Tech”为题，举例描述科技如何改变我们的生活方式，让外国友人了解生活在中国的便利和舒适。要包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；110词左右。

2.写作指导：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意谓语动词的时态，以及人称与数的变化；要保证语句通顺，意思连贯，逻辑合理。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。