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新世纪以来，中央加大了对农村的扶持力度，从2003年开始连续15年的中央一号文件都聚焦于农业、农村、农民（即“三农”）问题，十七大和十八大也分别提出了城乡统筹和城乡一体化的发展思路，对推动农村发展、增加农民收入起到了重要的作用。

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但是从发展动力来看，政策重点侧重于城市，使用的政策手段是城市和工业对农村的反哺和扶持，把农村放在了城市的从属地位。

乡村振兴战略的提出，是把乡村放在了与城市平等的地位上，立足于乡村的产业、生态、文化等资源，注重发挥乡村的主动性，来激发乡村发展活力，建立更加可持续的内生增长机制。这是一种思路的根本转变，确立了全新的城乡关系。

【佳作赏析】

A

改革开放以来，中国发生了翻天覆地的变化。尤其是党的十九大提出乡村振兴战略后，美丽乡村建设就步入了快车道。某英文网站正在开展以“家乡的巨变”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李洪，请你根据以下表格提示用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你家乡的变化，至少要有一条自己的观点。

Great Changes in My Hometown

过去

现在

住房

房子很小、破旧不堪

单元套房、楼房

交通

步行、骑自行车

地铁、高铁、飞机

通讯

写信

英特网、手机、微信、QQ

学校

自己带桌椅、窗户无玻璃

宽敞明亮的教室、家乡最美的地方

……

写作要求：

1.文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥以使行文连贯；

2.词数：80词左右；（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）

3.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。

Great Changes in My Hometown

Ever since the Reform and Opening-up, great changes have taken place in my hometown.________________

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【答案】

Great Changes in My Hometown

Ever since the Reform and Opening-up, great changes have taken place in my home town. In the old days, people used to live in small and broken houses. But now most people live in apartments in tall buildings. People used to go to work or school on foot or by bike in the past, but now subways, high-speed trains and planes are very convenient to take you anywhere. People used to write letters to keep in touch with each other in the past, but now mobile phones, WeChat and QQ are so popular as well as the Internet. My grandparents told me that they had to take desks and chairs from their homes to school and the classroom windows were broken with no glass, but now the most beautiful places are schools, and the classrooms are wide and bright. There didn’t use to be any hospitals in the countryside, and people had to go a long way to see a doctor. Now doctors come to every family to give physical examinations. There is no doubt that our hometown will become more and more beautiful.

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇记叙文，要求根据表格内容提示来写一篇征文稿，介绍自己家乡的变化，文章必须包括所有内容要点，并且至少要有一条自己的观点。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称来叙述；时态上描述过去用一般过去时，描述现在用一般现在时。写作时可适当使用一些副词和连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，结构清晰，表达具有条理性。

B

为大力推进生态文明建设，我市开展以“生态鄂州，美丽乡村”为主题宣传月活动。请你根据以下提示，以“共建绿色城市”或“共建美丽乡村”为主题，写一篇英语短文，呼吁广大市民爱护环境、保护生态, 建设美丽鄂州。

提示：

主题

 Build a green city / a beautiful village together

具体做法

方   式

益   处

1. 骑车、徒步出行

避免交通拥堵，减少空气污染

2. 不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰

让城市、乡村变得干净舒适

3. 植树造林

美化城市、乡村，保护环境

你的建议

联系自己的生活实际提出几条具体的合理的建议。（至少2条）

要求：

1. 80词左右（开头的首句已给出，不计算在总词数内.)

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。

参考词汇：吐痰：spit   垃圾箱：dustbin   交通拥堵：traffic jams  环境：environment

As a middle school student of Ezhou, it’s our duty to help build a green city / a beautiful village.

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【答案】

As a middle school student of Ezhou,it’s our duty to help build a green city / a beautiful village.We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. We mustn’t throw rubbish or spit anywhere. In This way,we can keep our city/village clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city / village beautiful.

In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can also save the energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room. In a word,everyone can play a part in building our city /village.

【详解】

本文属于材料作文，呼吁广大市民爱护环境、保护生态、建设美丽鄂州。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如in this way, keep adj, so that, had better, turn off, in a word, play a part以及by译为“通过”，后接doing……增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】

写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

C

学校校报举办“乡村的变化”主题征文活动。在党中央国务院的宏伟蓝图指引下，农村建设变化日新月异，人们的生活更是蒸蒸日上。请你根据下表提示，以“The Changes in the Countryside”为题，用英语写一篇80字左右的短文。

注意：

1．文中不得出现具体的地名，否则扣分。

2．字数80字左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3．要点完整，适当发挥，意思连贯. 语句通顺. 书写规范。

过 去

1．生活贫困，房屋破旧。

2．污染严重，垃圾遍地。

现 在

1．生活：住房宽敞、明亮；马路更多了，许多人有自己的汽车。

2．环境：山更绿，水更清，天更蓝……

将 来

请你展望乡村的未来。

The Changes in the Countryside

My grandparents live in the countryside. I often go to visit them and I find the countryside changes day by day. In the past,____________________________________________________________________________________ 

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【答案】

The Changes in the Countryside

My grandparents live in the countryside. I often go to visit them and I find the countryside changes day by day. In the past, people lived a poor life . The houses were old and small .Pollution was very serious,and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here . Now things have changed a lot over the years in the countryside. The environment has become more beautiful . The mountains have turned greener , the rivers cleaner and the sky bluer . There are trees , flowers and grass everywhere .People live a better life . Their houses are large and bright .There are more roads. Many people have their own cars . Every year , thousands of people from all over the world come to visit the countryside. I’m sure the countryside will become better and better in the future .

【解析】

本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种时态，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：day by day. ； thousands of ；all over the world； better and better；in the future;；There be句型等；运用对比的写法，运用了大量的形容词，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。

D

为庆祝党的生日，某英文报刊环保专栏近期正在举办英语征文竞赛，其主题是赞美家乡。假设你是李明，请你根据下面的图片及要点提示，写一篇以My Beautiful Hometown为题的英语短文投稿。

要点提示：

1. 过去的家乡：山、河流、垃圾……；

2. 现在的家乡：青山、绿水、空气、花鸟……；

3. 你的感想。

写作要求：

1. 文中必须包含所有提示要点，并适当发挥；

2. 条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；

3. 文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。

My Beautiful Hometown

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【答案】

My Beautiful Hometown

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. There have been a lot of changes in my hometown.

There were several barren mountains and a dirty river in my hometown. There was much rubbish and people lived a hard life. It was a poor and backward little town.

But now, there are green mountains, clean water, fresh air and lots of birds and flowers. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people has greatly improved.

I love my hometown and its people. We are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以My Beautiful Hometown为题，结合图片和提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍家乡的过去；第三段介绍家乡的现在；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

E

 假如你的家乡是中国北部一座美丽的村庄，请你根据下面的要点提示，以“ My hometown”为 题，用英语写一篇 80-100 词的短文介绍你的家乡。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

提示：

1. 有 80 多年的历史，以优质的苹果而闻名;

2. 现在村子里有了许多变化(房子变得更大、道路变得更宽、河水变得更清等)

3. 村子东边有几家俱乐部，人们工作之余可以锻炼身体，放松心情。

4…….

My hometown

My hometown is beautiful village in the north of China. ___________________________________________   

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【答案】

My hometown is a beautiful village in the north of China. A road runs through it, leading to the nearest market. You can see houses behind green trees along both sides of the road.

It has a long history of 80 years. There are about 300 people in the village. All of them are very friendly. In busy seasons, most of them do farm work in the fields. The village is famous for its fruits. It is famous for the apples. When summer comes, many businessmen drive here to buy them. There are some clubs in the east of the village, which provides some places for people to relax themselves. My hometown is becoming more and more beautiful. I love my hometown very much.

Welcome to my hometown.

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于提纲类写作，按题目要求和内容介绍自己的家乡。在写作时应承接短文开头简介一下家乡的地理位置；第二段按照内容提示，描述家乡的变化以及现状。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；中心内容以第一人称分别对题目的要求短文所包含的信息做了阐述；时态采用一般将来时为主，内容完整且条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：

短语：be famous for；more and more beautiful。

句型：leading to the nearest market非谓语动词表伴随；which引导的非限制性定语从句。

F

某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据提示，适当发挥，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，写一篇80词左右的英文短文。

说明：

1、提示仅供参考，不必逐句翻译。

2、参考词汇：狭窄的narrow

过去

1. 房屋破旧，街道狭窄。
2. 只有两个广场供人们休息放松使用。

现在

1. 住房宽敞明亮，每家都拥有自己的汽车。
2. 道路变得宽阔，交通不再拥挤。绿色的树木，美丽的鲜花簇拥在道路的两旁。
3. 有越来越多的广场为人们提供休闲场地。

将来

请你展望家乡的未来

 【答案】

The Changes in My Hometown In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here. Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountain have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍家乡的变化，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environmenthas become more beautiful. The mountain have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。