中考英语话题作文：绿水青山就是金山银山 <a hrEf=hTtps://Www.EUZw.nEt/miniform.html>提分快的苏州初中作文阅读培训</a>

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<a hrEf=hTtps://Www.EUZw.nEt/miniform.html>提分快的苏州初中作文阅读培训</a>

环境就是民生，青山就是美丽，蓝天也是幸福。改善环境质量，补齐生态环保短板，必须坚持“绿水青山就是金山银山”，加强生态文化的宣传教育，倡导勤俭节约、绿色低碳、文明健康的生活方式和消费模式，进一步提高全社会生态文明意识。要像保护眼睛一样保护生态环境，像对待生命一样对待生态环境，使生态文明成为社会主流价值观，成为社会主义核心价值观的重要内容。要正确处理好经济发展同生态环境保护的关系，牢固树立保护生态环境就是保护生产力、改善生态环境就是发展生产力的理念，更加自觉地推动绿色发展、循环发展、低碳发展，不断增强人民群众对生态环境的获得感。 <a hRef=htTps://Www.EuZw.nEt/miNifoRm.Html>苏州初中语文补习</a>

【佳作赏析】

A

 习近平总书记在十九大报告中指出：必须树立和践行绿水青山就是金山银山的理念，坚持节约资源和保护环境的基本国策。请你根据提示内容，以“To make our hometown better”为题写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你的观点。

1.内容提示：ride a bike, turn off the light, plant trees, don’t litter…

2.作文要求：

（1）包含以上观点。

（2）短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息等。

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【答案】

To make our hometown better

Hello, everyone. I’m Lin Hua. It’s my honor to talk about how to make our hometown better.

With the development of the society, environmental problems are becoming more and more important. As a result, we can do a lot of things to protect the environment of our hometown. For example, we can ride a bike to school. We must turn off the lights before we leave the classroom. We can also plant more trees. Don’t litter everywhere. We’d better sort the litter in our daily life. In a word, it’s our duty to protect the environment. We should try to make our hometown better.

Thank you for your listening!

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求以“To make our hometown better”为题，谈一谈如何使家乡变得更好，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍具体可以怎么做；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

B

近年来，国家提出了“绿水青山就是金山银山”的理念，人们越来越关注环保。假如你是学生Kate，你校要进行以“How to protect our Earth”为题的演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿。

1.词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数);

2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。

How to protect our Earth

Dear everyone,

I’m very proud that I have been chosen to speak to you all today.____________________________________

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I hope everyone will protect our Earth well. That’s all. Thank you for listening.

【答案】

How to protect our Earth

Dear everyone,

I’m very proud that I have been chosen to speak to you all today.

As we all know, there is only one earth. Green mountains and clear water are as good as mountains of gold and silver.

 The environment around us is getting worse and worse. Some people have no clean water to drink in some places. There is too much traffic on the road. The traffic causes air pollution. In many places, rubbish is thrown into lakes and rivers. So I think we should act to protect our earth.

First, our government should make laws. Second, we can go to school on foot or by bike in order to save energy. Third, we can use shopping baskets instead of plastic bags when shopping. We can separate waste into different groups so that it can be recycled.

I hope everyone will protect our Earth well. That’s all. Thank you for listening.

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文要求以Kate的身份写一篇以“How to protect our Earth”为题的演讲稿，注意演讲稿写作格式，文中不能出现自己真实姓名、校名等信息，写作时必须包含所提供的主要信息，可以作适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文属于演讲稿，主要写如何保护地球，所以本文的时态主要采取一般现在时。描述问题严重性时可采用比较级以及被动语态来写，使写作句式多样；在采取行动如何保护地球时，可以按照First，Second，Third顺序来写，使文章上下连贯，有条理。

C

为庆祝党的生日，某英文报刊环保专栏近期正在举办英语征文竞赛，其主题是赞美家乡。假设你是李明，请你根据下面的图片及要点提示，写一篇以My Beautiful Hometown为题的英语短文投稿。

要点提示：

1. 过去的家乡：山、河流、垃圾……；

2. 现在的家乡：青山、绿水、空气、花鸟……；

3. 你的感想。

写作要求：

1. 文中必须包含所有提示要点，并适当发挥；

2. 条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；

3. 文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。

My Beautiful Hometown

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【答案】

My Beautiful Hometown

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. There have been a lot of changes in my hometown.

There were several barren mountains and a dirty river in my hometown. There was much rubbish and people lived a hard life. It was a poor and backward little town.

But now, there are green mountains, clean water, fresh air and lots of birds and flowers. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theaters have sprung up one after another. The life of the people has greatly improved.

I love my hometown and its people. We are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以My Beautiful Hometown为题，结合图片和提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍家乡的过去；第三段介绍家乡的现在；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

D

“绿水青山就是金山银山。”请你结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法，以“How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful”为题，写一篇英语短文。

要点：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、人名等信息。

参考词汇：environment；pollution；reduce；sort the rubbish（垃圾分类）

How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful

The clean water and green mountains are our treasures____________________________________________

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【答案】

How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful

The clean water and green mountains are our treasures. But the environment pollution is a bit serious these days. In order to make our hometown more beautiful, we students should do something to protect the environment.

First we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave a room. Second, let’s walk or ride a bike to school. It is not only good for the environment but also good for our health. Third, we should also advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when shopping. We should stop using plastic bags to reduce pollution. Last but not least, we should try to sort the rubbish and throw it into the dustbin every day.

How important for us to protect the environment! Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference.

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头，根据自己平时保护环境的一些做法，介绍怎样使家乡更漂亮，可以从节约用电、绿色出行等方面来说明。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍时，力求语言准确，内容完整，行文连贯，保证条例清晰。

E

 习近平总书记提出"绿水青山就是金山银山", 这是中国生态文明建设的目标。保护环境, 从我做起。请结合自己的生活实际, 写出四种保护环境的具体做法及这样做的目的。

注意:

1. 行文连贯, 内容完整。

2. 字数80100词左右。

3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息。（姓名、校名和地名）

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【答案】

As we all know, environment is important for everyone. There is something we can do to protect it in our daily life.

First, we can turn off the light as well as other appliances when we are not using them. It can help us save the energy. Secondly, recycle the waste water, paper and other waste so that we can reuse them. We can turn the waste into useful things and make full use of them. It’s good for our planet to reduce so much waste stress. What’s more, when we go shopping, we had better use our bag instead of using the plastic bag. Finally, planting more trees is also a good way to make our world greener and fresher. More trees can reduce the air pollution.

In a word, let’s take action to protect the environment.

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题属于话题写作。写作时要注意文章的要求。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式，第一大段说环境的重要性；第二大段陈述生活中我们可以做的4件事来保护环境；第三大段呼吁大家一起保护环境，结构清晰，段落分明。用第一人称来进行写作分析；时态采用一般现在时为主。

3.高分亮点：

短语：as we all know，turn off，turn … into，make full use of，What’s more，in a word。

句型：when引导的时间状语从句，there be句型，so that引导的目的状语从句。