同等学力申硕英语作文 原文
The Robot Is a Machine After All
With development of modern science and technology, Robots could help people in more fields than ever. As far as some people are concerned who believe technology as god, they claim that robots will be as members of human in shorter future. In my opinion,this just is a fantacy illusion,for many things confine the trend, inlcuding technologies and the basic relationships between human and robots etc. The pictures shown in the composition gives us an example.
One man wants to play poker with a robot. He could not only set up rules of the game, but even also controll his opponent either. At the beginning of the game,the robot easily win the game.Once the man can not bear the result of the game, he would change the robot in the software of playing game. And then, the man will enjoy the victory of the game.
This example say that human is creator, conroller of robots in our worlds. No matter how powerful robots are, they are only serving for our human beings.It is the basic principle for the relationship between human and robot.As it is, robots are machines after all. <a hrEf=https://WWw.EuZw.nEt/MinifOrm.html>苏州阅读写作培训班</a>
点评：6—8分
你的论据很不错，只是文章的结构不是很好，首先在第一段就应该把漫画中的内容表达清楚，说明题目的观点。第二段就是分析原因，也就是找论据支持题目观点，第三段总结就可以了。另外要注意语法错误。只要你把结构稍作改动，再用上你的论据，文章就会出彩，加油啊。
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