托福 写作中有一些会“遗传”的错误，考生们只顾着怎样用经典的句子加分，却忽略了打好基础，万丈高楼平地起的道理。在用句措辞不能保证完全正确的情况下，返璞归真来的更实际，少一些浮夸华丽的辞藻，但也不至于在托福 写作中因诟病而被扣分，以下为大家列出托福写作中需要提防的10个常见错误。
1、用词不当
学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。
In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.
problems应改为questions
2、拼写错误
这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的误打，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。
In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers.
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judgement应改为judgment
3、乱用大词
First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn”t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.
这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题：
1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;
2)although和but是不能连用的;
3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;
4、表达中式
The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.
该句的表达过于中式化。
5、表意重复
They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.
前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。
The show is so compelling but attractive.
compelling和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。
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6、固定用法错误
To some extends, I agree with the author”s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.
To some extends应改为To some extent
7、例证夸张
For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient”s immediate death.
虽然善意的谎言是必要的，但是其功效显然没有这么大。
8、成分多余
According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.
该句中的shows that是多余的成分。
9、词性混乱
However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.
句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。
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托福大作文一般使用现在时态，除了拿过去事件 作为例子用过去时态。
Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.
claimed应该改为claim
《提醒：托福写作中需要提防的10个常见错误》添加时间：2024-12-14；更新时间：2025-03-09
